Better late than never. Here is my twittering tale for this week which was a great exercise for working on dialogue (which I need more practice). I wanted to veer away from my usual dark style for these shorts and tried to do something humorous.
‘Look, Bruce, if we go left here we’ll get right back on to Route 66.’
‘I see that Leo but if we want to eat at Lou’s we need to go straight.’
The two men argued about the Route 66 trip while their wives snickered.
‘Should we tell them Lou’s is around the corner?’
‘Yeah, and on 66?’
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Haha! Excellent dialogue Jo. I love the fact that These challenges help us hone our writing skills. Your story gave me a chuckle! Well done!
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LOL, I like that. It took me a while to come up with anything for this prompt. Just posted mine too.
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Bruce and Leo didn’t know that Lou’s was the standard meeting place for weekly “Wives night Out ” meetings
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🙂 I like that.
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