We were almost identical down to the tattoos which weren’t weird for the situation that we were both in but we sounded the same. We had the same memories, voice, and views of the world. We felt the sensation at the same time and reacted with an outburst, ‘OUCH!’ Only my pain was phantom and hers was real.
I lost my leg a year ago after my ex-boyfriend took a 12 gauge to my knee. I survived the loss of a limb and the infection that took my other leg. Thanks to the new law that passed my ex now has to supply with prosthetics as I get older so I can continue to live a normal life. I didn’t need a full droid of me. I just needed two functioning legs and to tell you the truth the mechanical me looked a little bit creepy.
‘You can control her movements from your smartphone. You can send her out into the world to do what is needed while your safe in your home.’ I squinted my eyes at the scare tactic that was being used on me. Who does this little white coat think he’s talking too? I survived looking down the barrel of a gun, losing limbs, healing, and dealing with the aftermath and he wants to scare me? Safe? What the hell does he mean safe? Someone could come in murder me on the couch and my droid-self could be controlled to do something heinous.
‘No thank you, I will stick with my prosthetics and can manage just fine.’ ‘What do you want us to do with her and your allowance left over?’ asked Mr. White coat. ‘Destroy her and I get to watch and make sure that it’s completed. The rest of my allowance please fashion me more updated prosthetics. White coat nodded and all three of us walked to the basement incinerator. It was surreal to see identical droid-me walk in without a protest without the will to fight. That is not me or who I was raised to be. I have the will to fight and a voice to protest.
This is my shot at science fiction (no pun intended). There is a ton of room for improvement but I wanted to try this genre. This is for Daily Post Prompt: Identical.
I think you’ve made a great start. I think you can build on this, if you want to. It is fine the way it is though. You could twist it that as you write, it becomes clear that actually it is the copy that survived and the real person who perished. 😉
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Oh my goodness! I never thought of that! Can you say genius? Adding this short story to my list of stories to make longer! Thank You 🙂
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you’re welcome. 🙂
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Oh my gosh, that is horrid what he did to you! Was he locked away?
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No, this is a piece of fiction which was inspired by my aunt.
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Wow… That was some sensational writing, although I feel bad for your Aunt.
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Oh wow thank you. Oh don’t feel bad for her, she’s a fiesty 4 foot little woman with the biggest blonde Texas hairdo ever. She taught me a lot about inner strength. I should’ve listened to her more. 🙂
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SOunds like my mother. She’s a tough cookie when she needs to be. 🙂
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🙂
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Oh and yes he was locked away 🙂
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Hope they threw away the key. 🙂
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The prisoner’s helped.
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Good idea and well devised plot. 😀 I love this. 😀
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Oh wow, thank you 🙂
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‘You can send her out into the world to do what is needed while you’re safe in your home’. Now THAT’s wonderfully creepy…😊
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Oh thank you so much 🙂
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Thank you so much for stopping by and your like on my blog post – I am glad I came to read yours because I am not the biggest fan of a fiction but what’ve written here was absolutely engaging and I enjoyed it. Keep it up and share more, please.! Take care!
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Thank and I enjoyed your post as well. Have a great day.
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This is a great start! It makes me want to know more!
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Thought provoking short story! I have an identical twin and was just curious what everyone would create with the word identical. Fun!
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